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There are the poor and the rich in most countries. A developing or an advanced nation has more people who are the rich and the poor. In my country, more developmental they are coming out. There are some comparisons and contrasts in Korea.

First of all, because both the poor and the rich are human, so they want to be happy. For leading a life, that we need money is true but, the most important thing is happiness. And, they can get an education until highschool because it is a duty of education in my country; however, the poor have limits to receive an better education becuase of money. Also, both try to get a job and money for better life. But there are also limits. In other words, the goverment ignores the poor, whereas the rich receive a benefit from the goverment. For example, it is easy for the rich to get a loan at a bank because their credits are perfect; however, not the poor. Finally, while the poor are becoming poorer and poorer, the rich are becoming richer and richer because it is easy for the rich to get a job and money.

Until now, there are many problems that we have to solve. These are becoming a social problem. The goverment is trying to make the social security system better. However, the most important thing for both is that they have to respect each other as a human, as not money.

# posted by Anonymous @ 7:33 AM