Friday, July 01, 2005
Paragraph Pattern from 6-27-05
The size of the USA is so much bigger than Germany, on the other hand I am able to travel Germany in 12 hour's from south to the north, while you could not travel the USA in 12 hour's.
While I travel with pupilc transportation, Americans travel by car across the country.
While I am sitting in the train for 12 hour's driving throw tunnels, on the other hand people in the US got to see the beautiful country side. While i am in the train, i am going to have 3 meals, on the other hand americans go to an drive throw every houer (Christin, you don't need to use both while and on the other hand in the same sentence.)
While I travel with pupilc transportation, Americans travel by car across the country.
While I am sitting in the train for 12 hour's driving throw tunnels, on the other hand people in the US got to see the beautiful country side. While i am in the train, i am going to have 3 meals, on the other hand americans go to an drive throw every houer (Christin, you don't need to use both while and on the other hand in the same sentence.)
# posted by Anonymous @ 7:11 AM 
