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I'd like to introduce my garden. My house has a big beautiful garden. The garden is made of bright green lawn. There is an old pine tree in the middle of the garden. It has been there since my house was built. When the house was built, we got many big stones which we cut and used to make a stone wall, so there is a gray middle stone wall around the house. There is big space and many dogs behind the house. My brother has raised a cute brown dog in big space behind the house. It is a good place for dogs. Our dogs play with a white cat. It is a strange affair because dogs are not friendly with cats. My father and my brother like dogs, but my mother doesn't like dogs, so my mom always says "Sell the dogs, please!"
The garden has a small, round pond and some goldfishes. It was made of stone. When(article) typhoon came, the pond was flooded and goldfishes died. Also, the garden has a special building for summer. It's a comfortable hut. It was made in the year 2000. I like to lay down and eat watermelons under the hut. When I ate the watermelon, I felt like I was in heaven. I miss the garden and my home.