Write, Edit, Write Again

MY FAMILY’S KITCHEN

1. It is at the back of my house.
2. It was recreated for two years ago.
3. It was designed by my friend.
4. It looks like between the classic and modern Thai kitchen.
5. Its floor is covered with the rectangular white tile.
6. There are a lot of clear slatted windows on the wall of the kitchen.
7. There is one set of dark brown wooden dining-table and chairs.



First Draft

MY FAMILY’S KITCHEN

I was born in Trang. It is a province in the southern of Thailand. It is a calm, clean, and beautiful province. I have lived in my house for twenty years. It has three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a room of worship, a living room, a drawing room, and a kitchen room. It has a yard surrounding my house. It has two ways to entry my house: the first is the stairs at the front and the other way is next to my kitchen. It’s sure that I choose the latter way to go into my house.

For me, the kitchen is the most fascinating room. It is at the back of my house. It was just redesigned two years ago and looks like a mixing between the classic and modern Thai kitchen. Its floor is covered with the rectangular white tiles. There are a lot of clear slatted windows on the wall of the kitchen. There are one set of dark brown wooden dining-table and chairs, a new gas stove, a medium new medium aluminum sink, a wooden food cupboard, and a big red refrigerator. Sometimes I feel like the color of(article) refrigerator is very strange for this room. However it is a good idea for choosing the red because it makes this room look like bright and colorful.

Every time I come in the kitchen room, I always sit to relax and find something to eat. The first place where I would like to find food is the refrigerator. Because it is a big refrigerator, it has many things such as fresh vegetable, fruits, pork, snack, beverage, and so on. I didn’t know the refrigerator has function more than I think. Actually nobody in my house knew before until my mother lost her money. It is about 8000 baht (200 dollars). She revealed that she kept her money in the dull plastic bag. Moreover she tightened her bag, put it in the plastic again, and picked it in the refrigerator. She forgot where she kept her money. Then she recalled her memory. She threw some bags in the refrigerator away in the garbage can. It may be included that her money bag.

Finally my mother didn’t get(her) money back. That is an very amazing story for me. I asked her about her idea to keep money in the refrigerator. She told me the dangerous place is the safe place. On the other hand I think the safe place is the most dangerous place for her. No matter what(article) situation is, the next time when I come in the kitchen, the first thing I do is that I will open the valuable refrigerator and find some money in the refrigerator.

I was born in Trang. It is a province in southern Thailand. It is a calm, clean, and beautiful province. I have lived in my house for twenty years. It has three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a room of worship, a living room, a drawing room, and a kitchen. It has a yard surrounding my house. It has two ways to enter my house: the first is the stairs at the front and the other way is next to my kitchen. It’s sure that I choose the latter way to go into my house.

For me, the kitchen is the most fascinating room. It is at the back of my house. It was just redesigned two years ago and looks like a mixing between the classic and modern Thai kitchen. Its floor is covered with the rectangular white tiles. There are a lot of clear slatted windows on the wall of the kitchen. There is one set of dark brown wooden dining-table and chairs, a new gas stove, a medium new medium aluminum sink, a wooden food cupboard, and a big red refrigerator. Sometimes I feel like the color of the refrigerator is very strange for this room. However(comma) it is a good idea for choosing the red because it makes this room look like bright and colorful.

Every time I come in the kitchen, I always sit to relax and find something to eat. The first place where I would like to find food is the refrigerator. Because it is a big refrigerator, it has many things such as fresh vegetable, fruits, pork, snack, beverage, and so on. I didn’t know(you can omit this) the refrigerator has more function than I thought. Actually nobody in my house knew before until my mother lost her money. It is about 8000 baht (200 dollars). She revealed that she kept her money in the dull plastic bag. Moreover she tightened her bag, put it in the plastic again, and kept it in the refrigerator. She forgot where she kept her money. Then she recalled her memory. She threw some bags in the refrigerator away in the garbage can. They may have included that her money bag.

Finally my mother didn’t get money back. That is a very amazing story for me. I asked her about her idea to keep money in the refrigerator. She told me the dangerous place is the safe place. On the other hand I think the safe place is the most dangerous place for her. No matter what the situation is, the next time when I come in the kitchen, the first thing I do is that I will open the valuable refrigerator and find some money in the refrigerator.(use a pronoun here)