Wednesday, June 01, 2005
Lumpini Park
First draft
If(subject) mention Lumpini park , everybody in Bangkok will know. It is a comfortable large old public park. I have gone there and felt like that. It is located in the heart of Bangkok and opens between 05.00 a.m. to 09.00 p.m. everyday. Everybody can go to it by walking , car , skytrain , and subway. By the way , it consists of a light blue lake , a small playground , an old Chinese pavilion , a small library , gigantic trees , wooden benches , diversified animals , and many people who visit it.
Lumpini park is used in many relaxing activities. Every morning and evening , healthful persons always work out. Furthermore , it has some special activities every Sunday such as arranging a big or small concert - concert in the park - that has both classical and modern songs , doing social dance that most elder people like to do , and so on. In addition , several students can learn about types of fauna and flora from it.
Besides the advantages above , Lumpini park is also a source to produce a lot(not necessary) of oxygen (O2) for citizens , it is like “the green lung”. Bangkok fulfills terrible dark pollutions such as Carbon dioxide (CO2) due to having a lot of cars in the traffic. So , the park that has fully many big tall old trees which can change CO2 to O2 and make every people be fresh.
Finally , the park is very useful for people which live in the city. Its benefits affect everything such as human being(plural) ( healthy , education , entertainment) , animals (having rest) , environment. I would like to suggest that organizations , especially government , should support anything for having the park. Who can deny the park?
Second draft
If(subject) mention Lumpini Park , everybody in Bangkok will know. It is a comfortable large old public park. I have gone there and felt like that. It is located in the heart of Bangkok and opens between 05.00 a.m. to 09.00 p.m. everyday. Everybody can go to it by walking , car , skytrain , and subway. By the way , it consists of a light blue lake , a small playground , an old Chinese pavilion , a small library , gigantic trees , wooden benches , diversified animals , and many people who visit it.
Lumpini Park is used in many relaxing activities. Every morning and evening , healthful persons always work out. Furthermore , it has some special activities every Sunday such as arranging a big or small concert - concert in the park - that has both classical and modern songs , doing social dance that most elder people like to do , and so on. In addition , several students can learn about types of fauna and flora from it.
Besides the advantages above ,Lumpini Park is also a source of oxygen (O2) for citizens , so it is like “the green lung”. Bangkok has a lot of terrible dark pollutants such as Carbon dioxide (CO2) due to having a lot of cars in the traffic. So, the park has fully many big tall old trees which can change CO2 to O2 and make every people be fresh. Finally , the park is very useful for people which live in the city. Its benefits affect everything such as human beings (healthy , education , entertainment) , animals (having rest) , environment. I would like to suggest that organizations , especially government , should support anything for having the park. Who can deny the park?
If(subject) mention Lumpini park , everybody in Bangkok will know. It is a comfortable large old public park. I have gone there and felt like that. It is located in the heart of Bangkok and opens between 05.00 a.m. to 09.00 p.m. everyday. Everybody can go to it by walking , car , skytrain , and subway. By the way , it consists of a light blue lake , a small playground , an old Chinese pavilion , a small library , gigantic trees , wooden benches , diversified animals , and many people who visit it.
Lumpini park is used in many relaxing activities. Every morning and evening , healthful persons always work out. Furthermore , it has some special activities every Sunday such as arranging a big or small concert - concert in the park - that has both classical and modern songs , doing social dance that most elder people like to do , and so on. In addition , several students can learn about types of fauna and flora from it.
Besides the advantages above , Lumpini park is also a source to produce a lot(not necessary) of oxygen (O2) for citizens , it is like “the green lung”. Bangkok fulfills terrible dark pollutions such as Carbon dioxide (CO2) due to having a lot of cars in the traffic. So , the park that has fully many big tall old trees which can change CO2 to O2 and make every people be fresh.
Finally , the park is very useful for people which live in the city. Its benefits affect everything such as human being(plural) ( healthy , education , entertainment) , animals (having rest) , environment. I would like to suggest that organizations , especially government , should support anything for having the park. Who can deny the park?
Second draft
If(subject) mention Lumpini Park , everybody in Bangkok will know. It is a comfortable large old public park. I have gone there and felt like that. It is located in the heart of Bangkok and opens between 05.00 a.m. to 09.00 p.m. everyday. Everybody can go to it by walking , car , skytrain , and subway. By the way , it consists of a light blue lake , a small playground , an old Chinese pavilion , a small library , gigantic trees , wooden benches , diversified animals , and many people who visit it.
Lumpini Park is used in many relaxing activities. Every morning and evening , healthful persons always work out. Furthermore , it has some special activities every Sunday such as arranging a big or small concert - concert in the park - that has both classical and modern songs , doing social dance that most elder people like to do , and so on. In addition , several students can learn about types of fauna and flora from it.
Besides the advantages above ,Lumpini Park is also a source of oxygen (O2) for citizens , so it is like “the green lung”. Bangkok has a lot of terrible dark pollutants such as Carbon dioxide (CO2) due to having a lot of cars in the traffic. So, the park has fully many big tall old trees which can change CO2 to O2 and make every people be fresh. Finally , the park is very useful for people which live in the city. Its benefits affect everything such as human beings (healthy , education , entertainment) , animals (having rest) , environment. I would like to suggest that organizations , especially government , should support anything for having the park. Who can deny the park?
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