Wednesday, June 22, 2005
The Environmental Problem
Cause and Effect
Main idea –Now a days, the environmental problem become a hot potato.
1. People need to care of their health more than the past.
2. The government spends a lot of money each year to make better the environmental problem.
3. The natural environment is destroyed because of the industrial expanding, so all organisms are lost their inhabitation.
The people are influenced by environment, so the environment is important for our living. However, you have a lot of environmental problems for the population growing; therefore, Now a day, the environmental problem becomes a hot potato. There are three reasons why the environmental problem becomes a hot potato.
Main idea –Now a days, the environmental problem become a hot potato.
1. People need to care of their health more than the past.
2. The government spends a lot of money each year to make better the environmental problem.
3. The natural environment is destroyed because of the industrial expanding, so all organisms are lost their inhabitation.
The people are influenced by environment, so the environment is important for our living. However, you have a lot of environmental problems for the population growing; therefore, Now a day, the environmental problem becomes a hot potato. There are three reasons why the environmental problem becomes a hot potato.
First, the people need to ^care of their health more than the past. They want to live more wealth, so they think about their life and health. That is the people are interested in the environmental problem. The second reason, the government spends a lot of money each year to make better the environmental problem. For example, the government constructs the water treatment system for getting pure water. Most important reason is that the nature environment is destroyed because of the industrial expanding, so all organisms are lost their inhabitation. They live with us, but people think about only our convenience. For example, the tropical forest is destroyed to farm or build something.
We spend a lot of things to increase environmental problems, like money, time and labor. Our life goes on, not the end, so we should protect nature for our descendents. It is our responsibility and duty.
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The people are influenced by environment, so the environment is important for our living. However, you have a lot of environmental problems from population growth; therefore, Now a day, the environmental problem becomes a hot potato. There are three reasons why the environmental problem becomes a hot potato.
First, the people need to take care of their health more than ^the past. They want to live more wealth, so they think about their life and health. That is ^the people are interested in the environmental problem. The second reason^, the government spends a lot of money each year to make better the environmental problem.(word order) For example, the government constructs the water treatment system for getting pure water.^ Most important reason is that the nature environment is destroyed because of the industrial expanding, so all organisms are lost their inhabitation. They live with us, but people think about only thier convenience. For example, the tropical forest is destroyed to farm or build something.
We spend a lot of things to increase environmental problems, like money, time and labor. Life goes on, naver ending, so we should protect nature for our descendents. It is our responsibility and duty.
First, the people need to take care of their health more than ^the past. They want to live more wealth, so they think about their life and health. That is ^the people are interested in the environmental problem. The second reason^, the government spends a lot of money each year to make better the environmental problem.(word order) For example, the government constructs the water treatment system for getting pure water.^ Most important reason is that the nature environment is destroyed because of the industrial expanding, so all organisms are lost their inhabitation. They live with us, but people think about only thier convenience. For example, the tropical forest is destroyed to farm or build something.
We spend a lot of things to increase environmental problems, like money, time and labor. Life goes on, naver ending, so we should protect nature for our descendents. It is our responsibility and duty.
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